Saturday, February 12, 2011

The Second Kiss

Since I started off with the first kiss, I thought I'd continue on with the second kiss in my upcoming release Quick Silver Ranch: Roped And Ready.

Today was more for them to become reacquainted, for him to find out
about her sexual experiences, so he would know just how far he could push her.
“Tease.” Her lips caressed his jaw.
“I’m going to tease you without mercy this week.” He nudged her head back so he could capture her mouth with his.
Becca shifted closer to Tyler. She wanted him, yes, but there was something more. Something known. They were very different people than they had been eight years ago, but inside her sensual side was hidden. Tyler could bring that out; he could uncover it and let her be the woman she needed—no—wanted to be.
His arms had her anchored around the waist, preventing her from turning in his arms to deepen this magnificent kiss. So, she shifted her arm up and curled it around his neck.
A moan escaped her lips when he broke off the kiss. “Talk to me. I want to know what you’re feeling.”

While the first kiss was hot, this one is more sensual, a prelude to things to come.

So tell me, do you mind that the hero broke the kiss off? He want's to know what the heroine is feeling, as a reader do you like that?

You can read more about Quick Silver Ranch: Roped And Ready by clicking here

16 comments:

Amy S. said...

I love the title to this. Sounds good!

Jean P said...

Great blurb. Yes I as reader want to know what she is feeling, what she is going to say, gives more to the story.

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joder said...

Great blurb and I don't blame him for stopping. He just wants to be sure before he gets in any deeper. Great sounding story that I'd love to read more of.

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Marie Tuhart said...

Hi Amy, thanks for the comment. I have to thank my critique partner for the title.

Marie Tuhart said...

Hi Jean, I'm glad to know this works for you as a reader. Thanks for stopping by.

Marie Tuhart said...

Hi Joder, glad to hear you'd like to read more. There is a more extended blurb and excerpt on The Wild Rose Press website, just click on the link in the post. Thanks for the comment.

Elie said...

Sure, the more insight into the characters,the more we connect with them.
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Cindy L said...

I don't mind if a hero breaks off the kiss...it can add to the sexual tension.

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Kasey said...

Yeah, I like it when the hero can tease a little. It works for me!

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Kasey said...

Plus it shows a different side to the male psyche. Writers typically only show them digging into the kiss. I like it when the tables are turned.

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Isabel said...

Nothing keep me turning the pages like hot, sensual tension. I'm glad he broke the kiss, because he wants to know how she's feeling. This is not about him or his needs, this all about Becca- the woman he wants to please. Oh, boy, I love Tyler already. :)

Isabel said...

Based on title I can imagine all the fun Becca and Tyler are going to have. :)

Marie Tuhart said...

Hi Elie, thanks for the comments. I want the readers to connect with my characters and do my best to make that happen.

Marie Tuhart said...

Hi Cindy, sexual tension is the name of the game, have to keep the readers on the edge of their seat. Thanks for commenting.

Marie Tuhart said...

Hi Kasey, I love showing my hero's doing something different than most men, especially turning the tables on the heroine. Thanks for stopping by.

Marie Tuhart said...

Hi Isabel, you got it, it's about her needs not his. And yes, the title gives you an idea of what fun this couple will have in their book. Thanks for commenting.