Saturday, February 12, 2011

Cheyenne and Darian's first kiss

First off, I want to apologize for any typos. I had no idea I could set my posts up ahead of time in the drafts section. Since I don't have a computer today, I am trying to post everything from my iPad, which means typing everything by hand. Live and learn!

My first kiss. Honestly, I don't remember my first little peck on the lips, I do however remember my first French kiss. I was in 7th grade at a dance. Of course I was with this guy who I thought was sooo hot. After we danced, I could tell he wanted to kiss me. So we went to stand next to the wall, where all the other kissing kids were. He means into me and puts his lips against mine. No biggie. Next thing I knew, he'd pushed his tongue into my mouth. I was totally unprepared. Not to mention the fact that he must have thought the idea was to tickle my tonsils. I mean, his entire tongue was in my mouth. I didn't know what to do with it! Needless to say, his skills weren't so great. It was like having a snake writhing in my mouth. As soon as he finished, I leaned over and gagged. It was the worst kiss of my life! At that moment, I had no desire to French kiss anyone again. I am happy to announce that since that horrible experience, I have tried French kissing and discovered it's not so bad.

Let's take a look at Cheyenne and Darian's first kiss in More Than Prophecy

Calm doom? Cheyenne wanted to scream. She didn't care how cloody the water was. I'm sure you got an eyeful of more than just the soap!

She struggled a moment longer and then fell still. It was a lost cause. She knew he was too strong. Instead, she turned her efforts to glaring at him through narrowed eyes. She was getting pretty good with her I hate you look, but he wasn't paying any attention. His gaze was cast lower.

Cheyenne looked down and gasped with horror. They were lo longer standing in deep water. Here the surface only came to the bottom of her ribs. Her breasts were completely exposed, and he took no shame in staring.

With renewed strength, she struggled vehemently. "Let me go!" She wrenched her arms, trying to break free.

Drain ignored heCir pulling her against him, he circled one thick forearm around her body and Pinned her wrists behind her back. Then he lowered himself down into the water and began to wade out farther, dragging him with her.

He took her out to the deepest part of the pool, behind the pillar of rocks and successfully concealed them from any onlookers. "I found this spot earlier," he declared triumphantly. Then he released her and stepped back, as though waiting to see what she would do.

Cheyenne stretched her toes downward, reaching for the bottom. But the water was too deep. " I...can'," she choked out between mouthfuls of fluid. She was so nervous she could barely keep her head above the surface.

He rewarded her with a knowing grin. "Hmm..." Wrapping his hands around her waist, he held her up so she wouldn't have to continue treading. " Is that better?"

Not knowing what else to do, she put her palms on his shoulders. " Why did you bring me out here? You promised to stay away."

Cheyenne knew she was babbling, but she couldn't help it. She was scared to death. This was a dangerous situation, one in which she was nearly helpless to escape. Suddenly, the water felt icy cold around her, and she began to tremble.

Her heart hammered in her chest, her breaths became gasps, and her mind was in a dizzying whirl of alarm.He's too close. This was a bad idea. You never should have trusted him.

"I want to--"

"Hush." It was more a lusty request than a harsh command.

Darian's hands slid down the curve of her spine and cupped her bottom. Pulling her up against him, he leaned down and captured her lips.

Cheyenne didn't know what was happening. Her mind told her run, kick, scream, anything to get away, but her body was determined to respond. A soft moan formed in the back of her throat as his tongue darted in and out of her mouth, bravely tasting her essence. Finally ignoring her head, she gave herself up to his skillful rapture.

Her whole body eagerly leapt to life as if it had been dormant, patiently waiting for the right man to release the passion inside. He'd awakened feelings of longing and desire she never knew existed within her. This new experience was Alarming and exciting at the same time,making her eager to know more. Suddenly she, needed to know what making love felt like.

Primal hunger surged through her veins, making her heart beat with The erratic rhythm of mounting passion. Instinctively, she wrapped her legs around his waist and pressed herself even closer. He was so warm so hard, so strong. She didn't care if she hated herself later, right now, her whole being yearned for fulfillment, and only he would suffice.

To read more excerpts from Shannon Leigh's writing, visit her Website.

More Than Prophecy is a full-length romance novel and is available from Amber Quill Press.


Kasey said...

LOL. I love first kissess scenes! They're a whole lot of fun. :0) This really made me smile. Thanks for sharing.

Elie said...

hehe. Thanks for sharing.

Linda Swift said...

I like this excerpt. The setting was very "real." And I sympathize with your problems with the posts. I didn't realize I could have prepared them earlier either. And I hate rushing to do things at the last minute. I'm sure the instructions were clear. I just don't follow instructions well! Linda

Caffey said...

Hi Shannon! This one's a favorite of mine of yours! I love how she so gave in to all it was doing for her! Beautiful excerpt!

I so not techy too, I would be doing what you are if I had to! Thanks for posting this excerpt for us!

Cindy L said...

Wow...that's a hot first kiss! Thanks for sharing!!