Hi
everyone, I'm Lucy Felthouse, an erotica and erotic romance author, and I'm
excited to be taking part in this great Haunting Halloween Blog Fest. It's very
fitting that I should be here, actually, as October brought two new releases
from me, both of which are very different, but share a common theme... ghosts.
And,
without further ado, I'd like to share an excerpt from one of my releases, Weekend at Wilderhope Manor with you.
It's a Halloween themed lesbian erotica piece, but I've picked this most spooky
scene out to really get the chills running up your spine, and the hairs
standing up on the back of your neck. I got them when I was writing it, so I
hope it hits the spot for you, too!
Excerpt from Weekend at Wilderhope Manor
The
hedge which lined the right-hand side of their path had come to an end now, and
off to that side was another lawn. Beyond that, a much higher hedge with a
purpose designed gap to admit entry. It had to be the maze. The girls walked
across the lawn in the direction of the maze's entrance. Once they reached it,
they looked at each other in awe. The maze's walls were even higher than they'd
first thought.
Jenny
said, "I think I'd rather we went in together. Wouldn't you? It's all a
bit Alice in Wonderland, and I don't
want to come a cropper with the Queen of Hearts while you're drinking tea with
the Mad Hatter and the White Rabbit."
Stephanie
laughed out loud, jabbing Jenny playfully with an elbow. "Where do you
come up with these ideas?! It's just a maze, sweetheart. But if it'll make you
feel better, we'll go through together. I guess it could get a little creepy as
we get inside."
That
decided, the girls walked in. Stephanie, the more logical of the two, led the
way through the narrow corridors in search of the elusive centre. She felt
confident at first, but as the twists and turns continued, she felt less so.
That and the fact that she'd been right about the creep factor. It was a clear
but not particularly bright day, resulting in very little natural light
penetrating the hedges that made up the maze. It was navigable but incredibly
gloomy, and Stephanie sensed that Jenny was staying as close behind her as
possible without treading on the backs of her shoes. Honestly, she didn't blame
her. Even Stephanie was starting to feel a little spooked. The silence wasn't
helping. From their sheltered position, they could see glimpses of the sky, but
they couldn’t hear anything other than the sound of their own footsteps and
breathing.
Stephanie
picked up the pace, albeit subtly. She didn't want to worry Jenny, but she
wasn't quite sure where they were and she was feeling really quite nervous.
Despite the silence and the fact they hadn't seen another soul since they'd
left the house, Stephanie suddenly had the oddest feeling that they weren't alone.
It was a silly notion, because the walls of the maze were so thick that you
couldn't see through them, so it wasn't like anyone could be secretly spying on
them. But Stephanie simply could not shake her apprehension. She desperately
wanted to get out of the maze, but saw no way of doing it quickly. Even turning
back wouldn't guarantee a swift exit because they wouldn't remember each twist
and turn they'd taken. They could just end up stuck in here even longer.
Suddenly,
Jenny's Alice in Wonderland comment
didn't seem so stupid after all. Refusing to let Jenny sense her fear, she
looked steadfastly in front of her and carried on walking. Then she heard the
crack of a twig which sounded like it came from up ahead. Unfortunately, Jenny
heard it too.
"Wh
– what was that?!" Jenny said, clutching onto the back of Stephanie's
coat.
In spite
of all her layers, Stephanie felt a shiver run down her spine but forced
herself to continue putting one foot in front of the other. Trying – and
failing – to inject some normalcy into her voice, she replied, "Pr –
probably just someone else from the house. You can enter from either side of
the maze, remember. They could have come in the opposite end. I expect we'll
bump into them shortly."
They
didn't bump into anyone, but the path started to broaden and they soon emerged
into the centre of the maze, much to Stephanie's relief. She knew they were far
from home and dry, but at least she wasn't feeling like the walls were closing
in on her anymore. They took a few minutes to stop and Stephanie looked into
each of the paths leading off the centre to see if she could see anyone lurking
there. She was reminded of the incident in the corridor outside the library the
previous evening, and wondered if the same person was trying to scare them
here, too. She decided not to say anything to the other girl. There was no
point; with Jenny's imagination she'd be conjuring up ghosts and ghouls left,
right and centre and getting her out of the maze would be even more of a chore
than it was already.
"Come
on," Stephanie said loudly, as if trying to prove how perfectly fine she
was feeling, "let's get going."
Stephanie
walked towards the potential exit paths and chose one, hoping against hope that
it was the right one. She didn't know how much longer her nerve would hold out.
Jenny followed close behind, seemingly calmer now as the single broken twig
hadn't been followed up by anything else. Walking steadily onwards, Stephanie
made quick decisions on their turns, thinking that even if she got it wrong,
keeping this pace would mean she could correct quickly and get them the hell
out of the maze.
Neither
girl spoke. After a while, Stephanie wasn't sure how close they were to the
exit, but she sensed they were almost there. They hadn't hit a dead end in a
while. Then she heard a noise from behind Jenny. Spinning, she grabbed Jenny
and pushed in front of her, ready to face their foe head on. She was terrified,
but she sure wasn't going to show it.
"Who's
there?"
Nothing.
Stephanie waited, her upper arms starting to hurt where Jenny was gripping them
tightly.
"Hello?
Are you lost?"
Still no
response. If there was a genuine patron in the maze, they'd have replied.
"Oh
for fuck's sake!" Stephanie yelled. "What are you, some kind of
creepy pervert that likes scaring women? Well it's not working!"
She was
lying through her teeth, of course, but she wasn't going to let their stalker
know that.
"We're
going now, anyway. So you'll have to find someone else to try and scare, all
right?"
This
time, the response was the sudden approach of heavy footsteps. As one, both
girls spun round and ran in the direction they'd been heading as fast as they
could. The noise they were now making masked out any their assailant might have
been producing, but Stephanie didn't care. She wanted out – now. She ran close
behind Jenny, thanking their lucky stars when she finally saw an opening in the
hedge which would lead them back out of this godforsaken hole.
Jenny
had obviously spotted it too, as she had a sudden burst of speed which took her
right to the exit. She was almost on the grass when she suddenly tripped – over
nothing. Stephanie had no time to react and she ended up tripping over Jenny
and they both sprawled on the grass in a heap. They hurriedly disentangled,
aware they were being followed and about to come face-to-face with their
attacker.
Only,
they weren't. Whoever had been pursuing them in the maze didn't emerge.
*****
When Stephanie and
Jenny go to a Murder Mystery Halloween weekend at Wilderhope Manor, they’re
expecting fun and games. But following creaky floorboards, spooky noises and an
alarming encounter in the Manor’s grounds, the girls begin to wonder if there’s
more to Wilderhope Manor than meets the eye. As they find frequent comfort in
one another’s arms – and their bed – will the girls discover what’s causing the
bumps in the night, or will they run scared?
*****
Lucy is
a graduate of the University of Derby, where she studied Creative Writing.
During her first year, she was dared to write an erotic story - so she did. It
went down a storm and she's never looked back. Lucy has had stories published
by Cleis Press, Noble Romance, Ravenous Romance, Summerhouse Publishing,
Sweetmeats Press and Xcite Books. She is also the editor of Uniform Behaviour
and Seducing the Myth. Find out more at http://www.lucyfelthouse.co.uk. You
can also find her on Facebook
and Twitter.
Thanks
so much for popping by to read my post. Come back later for another creepy
excerpt and a post on why I like to write about country houses in my stories.
Don't forget to leave comments in order to be in with the chance of winning the
prizes being given away as part of the event. Also, don't forget to head over
to the Whipped Cream Blog where I'm talking libraries, as well as interviewing
two of my characters.
8 comments:
I wanna get lost in a spooky maze! Oh I really do... sounds fab, Lucy x
Okay that was rather spooky, there is a reason I won't do mazes *L*
Great excerpt, adding this one to my growing list!
skpetal AT hotmail DOT com
lol - Mazes are spooky even without unseen pursuers. Love it!
That was a bit eerie. I love mazes but only with those I am with.,
debby236 at gmail dot com
Really intense, Lucy! And mazes can be really scary places. Certainly the one at Wilderhope Manor is! Great story for Halloween!
I felt like I was right there with the girls. A maze can be a scary thing to be trapped in as is a haunted house. I am recalling Alice in Wonderland.
Thanks everyone - I'm glad you liked my spooky maze excerpt. There's plenty more spookiness in Weekend at Wilderhope Manor :)
What a cool idea. I love mazes! Happy Halloween!
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