“Open the
doors, sweet cheeks,” Mr. Clean said with a growl, “and no funny stuff or you’ll
live much longer than you want to.”
Laine only
nodded, and realized she might actually be able to blubber after all. Her heart was hammering in her chest and her
mouth was dry. Her hands trembled as she
got out of the car. Once the barn doors
were open she turned and looked at her captor.
He opened his window.
“Drive her
on in, honey,” he said with a sweet smile.
“Then we can close the doors and have us some privacy.”
Laine closed
her eyes for a moment, then nodded and got back behind the wheel. The Rover passed through the doors, from
light into darkness, from out in the open to hidden, alone, with him.
The first fingers of panic clutched at her heart. She took several deep breaths, then parked
and shut off the engine.
“Close the
doors,” he said again. “Ain’t nobody
going to see us way out here, but I prefer to err on the side of caution.”
When Laine
exited the vehicle so did Mr. Clean. He
moved to the side as she walked past him.
The next scene in this little drama played out in her head as she pulled
the barn doors shut. She wondered if she
could possibly pull off what she was thinking.
Did she have even the slimmest chance of getting the drop on a trained
mercenary? Then again, she didn’t have
much choice but to try.
Laine had
deliberately left her car door open, and Mr. Clean stood to the left of it, one
hand resting on the top of the door frame.
She swallowed hard and tried to be as non-threatening as possible as she
approached him. He watched her out of
the corner of his eye, and scowled when she leaned across the driver’s seat to
reach for her purse. Immediately the gun
whipped around and found a tender spot between her shoulder blades.
“What do you
think you’re doing?” he asked in a deadly voice. “I said no funny stuff.”
“The keys to
the cellar are in my purse,” she replied, holding her hands up. “Unless you want to break down the door, we
need them.”
It was
nearly ten seconds before he spoke. “Fine,
but watch yourself. One wrong move and
it will be days before I kill you.”
Laine nodded
mutely and reached for the purse. She
took the strap with her left hand, and put her right hand inside the bag. The gun was easy to find since it was a lot
bigger than a lipstick, and she wrapped her fingers around the grip, flicking
the safety off with her thumb. With
exaggerated slowness she backed out of the Rover and turned toward him. He growled, grabbed the strap, and jerked the
bag from her. Laine held her breath.
“Give me
those keys,” he said as he searched the inside of her purse, the muzzle of his
pistol angling toward the floor as he did so.
He never noticed the gun in her right hand. He didn’t even notice it when she leveled it
at his chest. Several seconds passed before
he froze, his eyeballs swiveling to look at the pistol.
Laine grit
her teeth. “I know you wanted to . . . explore
this relationship,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper, “but I think I’m
going to have to kill you. Now.”
She squeezed
the trigger just as she’d been taught all her life, and there was a soft “pfft”
as the pistol fired. Mr. Clean looked at
her in shock. Laine fired again. He seemed frozen, then the spell broke and he
fell backwards.
Strong
fingers wrapped around her wrist and she nearly jumped out of her skin, the gun
discharging again as she reflexively squeezed the trigger. Jack stood to her right, on the other side of
the open driver’s door, reaching around the frame, his eyes filled with concern
and fear.
“Give me the
gun, Laine,” he said in a whisper. “It’s
over.”
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Great excerpt. Thanks so much
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Thanks, Debby!
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